Tuesday, October 23, 2018


  1. i like the way you have used the bright glissing sun in your poem zoey great job

  2. I like how you have more than 6 lines of slow writing because in my class room the minimum was 6 lines.
    I also like how you have a background.
    But next time make sure to make sure it does not go out to your profile.


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